Thursday, 14 August 2014

What Does Jack Find?



Jack looked high up at the huge beanstalk and decided to climb. He climbed and climbed until he reached the top, jack spotted red puffy clouds, he heard strange noises above the old trees and he spied a dark scary and spooky cave. He wanted to be brave so he snuck right past the scary bears that were asleep in the dark cave. Suddenly he stepped on the oldest bears paw and all the hungry bears woke up and chased Jack away. Before jack even snunk through the cave he saw a golden cub shining in the cave, he said in his head I have read about the golden cub before. When all the bears chased him he scurried down the beanstalk and his heart was jumping up and down like a frog jumping onto a lily pad. He knew he would go back when his mum was not looking and he will steal the golden cub that gave the bears money and gold. So the next day when his mum was asleep he tiptoed past her room quietly and quickly. He closed the door slowly again and he ran behind the house where the beanstalk grew. He climbed and climbed and he reached the top of the beanstalk and he snuck through the cave and stole the golden cub and of course Jack and his mum lived happily ever after. 


written by Christina Antonio

3 comments:

  1. Wow, Christina I love the way you have used strong verbs to make your story more interesting for the reader. Scurried, tiptoed, climbed- Fantastic

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    1. Thanks Mrs England I really worked hard to make my story amazing for the reader.

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  2. Wow room 9 you have been so busy with all this wonderful writing you have published on here. Well done.

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